Lord of Darkest Pluto - A Planetary Rulers Novel

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Permalink Reply by Paulina aka Fantasia on October 10, 2009 at 10:09pm

I like it. A great start.
The only question I have is who is Adrian? Is it the same person as Chad? That part confused me a bit.

Blessings
Fantasia

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Permalink Reply by MoonDove Starfyre on October 10, 2009 at 10:26pm

That was a typo, that I had missed. I am currently changing his name. So there might be more typos later on.
I didn't have my eyeglasses on, sorry! LOL!

Thank you,

MoonRaven.

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Permalink Reply by MoonDove Starfyre on October 11, 2009 at 9:06am

This is an edited version for you to read.

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Permalink Reply by MoonDove Starfyre on October 11, 2009 at 11:35am

Typos running rampant, had to change some more.

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Permalink Reply by MoonDove Starfyre on October 11, 2009 at 3:43pm

I think that I have it right this time. LOL!

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