Could you add more to it? It's a little sparse to get the feeling for what you are wanting to get across. It would be easier to give you feedback if it was filled in some more rather than just this bit of dialogue. This small amount isn't…
Led By Maryann, This club will be sharing Book of Shadow Pages and Art, as well as discuss different styles of Book of Shadows. We will be adding public domain pages, creative common pages, as well as people adding materials, sharing with us.See More
well the girls in the story are in their senior year and i guess anyone who would read it should be at least ten, i mean that's when i started reading "big books"
merry meet! i've been writing stories for like ever, and i was reading some book about the elements and it really inspired me! i started a story and i really hope you like it and if there is something you don't understand/did not get, please tell me... oh and it's like still the first part of the book so it's not finished!! thanks Aphrodite - california "all right girls," i started, "Today we get on the plane to Ireland, do we have everything? outfits and pjs?" they…See More